You deliver a nicely paced sci-fi with a dash of tension and romance, both of which feel organic and appropriate. The piece is slightly dense in places, but it's not easy to write a perfectly balanced short story sci-fi that ticks all the boxes! And you do well with the word count! Thank you for engaging on a meaningful level with other writers, providing empathy and encouragement.
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RE: White noise in the void / Ruido blanco en el vacío - The Inkwell Combined Writing Prompt #17
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